Nice ID. the two shots work well together.
One easy thing you should try is modifying the frame. Make it at a uniform width - It'll look better.
Also, you might want to try making it the same width as the borderline that's between the pictures.
OH, and is that an old Yashika?
I've got a 30 year old yashika at home myself.
Been using it before i've gone digital (bought a 350D last year).
Though i sometimes miss the smell and feel of film, it's definitely hard to go back once you've gone Digi.
your gallery is amazing.. and you're just 16
do you make a lot of modifications on your photos or they're natural?
coz your photos look taken with a big good camera... and your FinePix A340 doesn't look as good =/
they're just beautiful